First edit

Initially I edited my film with the name of "Ek zindagi". But later when my teacher guided me that the name does not go with the film and there were many problems in the film. In this version of the film which was the first edit there were many slow and fast motions which were distracting. There was no natural sound of the film and only the music which was constant and not changing. The dialogues were not clear and the story was not conveyed. This version of the film was more like a music video and so I changed my plan and than I edited my film again according to the points my teacher highlighted. Below is the link of the my film which was the initial edit.

http://vimeo.com/64050633