Saturday, 17 November 2012

SCENE DIVISIONING



SCENE 1
Time: Morning
Character:  Jabar-bin-abdullah(invigilator)
                 Ali(student)
Location: Examination Hall (School)
In an examination hall of a school, Jabar-bin-abdullah is the invigilator for the examination sitting on the chair and reading the news paper. Ali, a student is sitting in the middle of the class thinking of something and smiling while other students are busy doing their paper. When first bell rings, Ali takes out the paper from his pocket to read something while Jabar announces the time and sees Ali doing that. Jabar comes to Ali’s seat, punishes him, takes the paper and goes back to his place. Ali keeps standing in the rest of the time in the hope that his teacher will return the paper until the final bell rings and all the students leave the class one by one keeping the paper on jabar’s table. When Ali is going to the door of examination room, Jabar opens the scribbled page and then a flashback starts.
DIALOUGES:
Jabar:
(announcing the time) aadha ghanta reh gya hei.. jaldi haath chalao.. ek minute upar nae milegy!
Jabar:
 (to Ali) aye larke! (ali looks at him) Haan tu! Khara ho zara! (takes his paper) itne araam se nakal kar rha hei! (shouts at him) Haath aage kar apne (beats him with scale, takes his sheet and go to his place)
TRANSLATION:
Jabar:
(announcing the time) half an hour is left.. increase your speed.. wont spare even a single minute!
Jabar:
(to Ali) hey larke!(boy) (Ali looks at him) Yes you! Stand up! (takes his paper) cheating it so easily! (shouts at him) Put your hand forward! (beats him with scale, takes his sheet and go to his place)

SCENE 2:
Time: Morning
Character: Ali (student)
                 Suraya (Ali’s mother)
Location: Near Junkyard
Ali is standing near a junkyard with his mother Suraya who hugs him and keeps a folded paper in his pocket. Ali gets onto his school bus. When he sits on his seat he takes out that paper reads it, smiles, and keeps the paper back into his pocket and flashback ends.

SCENE 3:
Time: Morning
Character:  Ali
                  Jabar
Location: Examination Hall
In the same classroom Jabar sees the quotation written on that paper (voice over of the mother saying that quote) and turns to Ali who is leaving the room. He calls him on which Ali stops and turns. Jabar walks towards Ali, kneels down, puts the paper back in his shirt pocket, Jabar rubs his hand on Ali’s hairs with affection and both of them leave the room.
DIALOUGES:
Quotation on paper (voice over of Suraya):
“Darro mat beta… Mei har waqt tumhare saath hun, abhi bhi tumhare pass hy hun… Tum sirf muskurao aur aage barho - Tumhari ami jaan”
Jabar:
(stopping Ali) O larke! Ruk!
Ali:
(turns and looks back)
Jabar:
( Kneels down,
puts the paper back in his shirt pocket) jaa.. khush reh!



TRANSLATIONS:
Quotation on paper (voice over of Suraya):
“Don’t be scared son… I am always with you; I am by your side even right now… you just smile and move forward… - your ami jaan

Jabar:
(stopping Ali) Hey boy! Stop!
Ali:
(turns and looks back)
Jabar:
( Kneels down,
puts the paper back in his shirt pocket) go… live happily!

SCENE 4:
Time: Day
Character: Ali
Location: School
Scene is shown where Ali is very happy and is dancing around the school enjoying his happiness of regaining the lost confidence and motivation of life. He comes out the school were his lovely mother is waiting. He runs towards his mother and they both hug each other. Film ends

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